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Ara and Celi World 2, Page 18 by JadineR Ara and Celi World 2, Page 18 by JadineR
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Despite me saying that I won't be uploading all of the pages from Legendary Beings Ara & Celi...I really liked how these 3 pages turned out, so up they go.

I'm so excited for these next pages...I love drawing and writing Celi, and I've been waiting so long to draw her (re)appearance that I think I changed her face structure slightly again 8D

I really liked how this page turned out, but I feel like there's something missing here :confused:


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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
I have to admit, I'm kind of... confused. Are her hands glowing? I don't get the need for the hand close-up. I also think you should give them proper panels at the bottom. It works at the top to give the action a slow-mo effect, but I think the bottom action scene is supposed to play out quickly. In that case, changing the camera angle would help.

You're getting better at drawing hand, though!
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JadineR Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Yay! :la: One of my early critiques for the comic on Gaia (or well "critiques" since among the paragraphs given, it looked more like personal taste vs what's really helpful for someone to improve...) was that my hands looked really awful. I always liked drawing hands, so reading that was D: for me. I kept that in mind throughout the years, so I'm glad it's beginning to bear fruit <3

Haha, yeah I thought the same thing you did about her hands. They weren't supposed to be glowing but I unfortunately miscalculated the space needed and uh, yeah it was all kind smooshed together near the end (It didn't help that I realized this halfway through toning...;o; ) So yeah it looks like her hands are glowing when really, I was trying to make space so that her hands didn't look like on top of her wings XD That's probably what was eating at me after I finished it...there was a point to the close-up on Celi's hands but I will most likely either take it out or add more space between the hand and the last panels when I recheck the page for errors before printing. Depends on other readers' reactions.

Oh, I don't know if changing the camera angle is good, since the later pages are penciled with that angle in mind :X I will have to think about that...especially when this is my second idea for those panels (the first was just "hands action", which looked silly in the thumbnail the day after I drew it). I'll try out the proper panels suggestion when I can :D *makes note*
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CrimeRoyale Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Professional
Hand to hand combat!
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JadineR Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Hii-yah!
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