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Submitted: February 8
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Ara and Celi, pgs. 21-22by =JadineR

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Comics / Pages

acbnksdbcksdb THANKS DA FOR EATING MY TITLE AND DESCRIPTION.

These are the latest pages from my webcomic Legendary Beings Ara & Celi.. If you would like to read it, please check out the link here.

Thanks! <3

Ara & Celi (C)

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*Reenave Feb 10, 2013 Student Digital Artist

Wow!! Muy buena composición!!

=JadineR Feb 11, 2013

¡Gracias!

*OgawaBurukku Feb 10, 2013 Professional General Artist

I like the horizontal lines tone you used, looks very ethereal. But to be totally honest, the panels on the far right are hard to follow. Even without dialogue, I should be able to follow it, but I can't (especially with that word balloon dripping down past a few panels). The middle looks nice, but you might try using more conventional layouts for your comics (not talking about your experimental stuff like the music video comic).

=JadineR Feb 11, 2013

Thank you for the feedback <3

Heh, I was trying to depict two actions there at once (one of my weaknesses in comicking): Miyara and Celi's reaction. Funny thing about it is that, after maybe the next page, the rest of the pages are all laid out conventionally

Well, I think so, at least.