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Fragmented, pg.19 -- Finby =JadineR

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That's the end, folks.

The comic turned out to be 19 because I counted the cover as part of the 20 pages. Oops ^^;

Anyway, how was it? Confusing? (A-ok) Interesting? Visually pretty, at least? :XD: I will be opening preorders for this soon, so keep an eye out!


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*adamantis Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist
I admit to finding this story rather demanding on me, there is a lot in this i probably don't quite grasp, it felt dark and moody with a touch of angst. But it was interesting, and the approach you've used with such varied layouts for each page adds to that :nod:
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=JadineR Feb 11, 2013
Oh, thank you so much for reading it, and the feedback! :D

I admit, there is one, possibly two, page/s where I purposely wrote/drew it in a way where people would have to make up their own minds about what's depicted on the page. I didn't mean for the entire story to be like that ^^; But I'm glad that it felt dark/angsty (goal achieved!) and that it was at least interesting (another goal!) <3
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*JoJo-Seames Jan 29, 2013  Professional Artist
Aw, dude, that was really interesting. It's SO cool how experimental it is. And I like how abstract it is, as a narrative; feels more like a piece of music than...any other music-themed comic I think I've read? Awesome.
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=JadineR Jan 31, 2013
This comment makes me so happy and proud that I want to marry it :love: Thank you!

I tried to think in a definite "music piece" way -- like, what would someone see or feel when they'd hear this (fake) song? How would this be performed? I'm really happy to see you understood it as I meant it <3333
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~CrimeRoyale Jan 28, 2013  Professional
Ominous. Just how dark will this comic go? I like it...
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=JadineR Jan 31, 2013
Thank you so much, really <3 Making this comic was actually cathartic at one point.
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~CrimeRoyale Jan 31, 2013  Professional
Oh? Are you having fun with it? ;)
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=JadineR Feb 8, 2013
I did! Learning about ink techniques definitely helped me level up a bit :nod:
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