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The elusive page 17 appears! Elusive because I finally found it about a few days ago...I found only ONE copy of this page in TIFF form in all my backup CDs of this comic. I don't even know where the heck the original .psd file is 
(I think I lost it...
)
It's kinda of a golden rule to not put so much text on one page, but I needed this dialogue on this page just the way it was (I don't even remember whether I added or eliminated dialogue lines!.) Looking it over now, I think the dialogue might be confusing to follow. What do you all think?
I love, LOVE page 17.
I like how I pulled the ghost effect on page 18. I totally have no idea about chara heights and whatnot though xD
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(I think I lost it...)It's kinda of a golden rule to not put so much text on one page, but I needed this dialogue on this page just the way it was (I don't even remember whether I added or eliminated dialogue lines!.) Looking it over now, I think the dialogue might be confusing to follow. What do you all think?
I love, LOVE page 17.
I like how I pulled the ghost effect on page 18. I totally have no idea about chara heights and whatnot though xD
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Perhaps instead of having several word balloons like that on the left page, a big block of text would have been better?
Nice to see the allusive page has finally found its way home
Nice to see the allusive page has finally found its way home